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Just Some School Stuff

Post by Presidente on Thu May 29, 2008 12:12 am

Everything here is a little to depressing for me (just my opinion) so I decided to post a few poems of my own. There ment to be taken humourous and it took about 5 minutes to make them so I don't expect them to recieve great reviews but I thought I might lighten the mood.

P.S. The prayer is suposed to be taken as if someone was praying to their god (in this case, Dr. Seuss).

Insane cult of Dr. Seuss Prayer
Oh Dr. Seuss who lives in my shoe,
There's a Wocket in my pocket, what shall I do?
Shall I put it over here, should I put it over there?
Should I give it to a fox, should I give it to a bear?
I asked if he liked green eggs and ham,
To which he replied, "No I don't, Sam I am"
So now I am stuck, I really am troubled,
Soon all my problems will begun to have doubled,
So I ask you, Lord Seuss, who lives in my shoe,
There's a Wocket in my pocket, what shall I do?

Inkompetensy Hiku

I wil rite hiku
it wil be a grate hiku
i will be don now
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Re: Just Some School Stuff

Post by fireflare77 on Sun Jun 01, 2008 3:30 am

Carter, I actually liked the first one. I wasn't expecting that to come from you (or for that matter out of me, right now) but credit where credits due, nice work. I'd say "nice attempt" but that would reduce the value of everything you've written. So... nice work. As for the second one... No comment.

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