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Post by Super-Z on Sat May 31, 2008 11:01 pm

If words could weep, then mine would scream
Mine would claw and beg
For mercy comes little in their world
And hope is far and spread

If people read thoughts, then children would cry
Sisters would bleed and mothers would die
For my thoughts are dark, as the deepest well
They spiral and twist and lurch and turn, until calm they find again

My face hides it well, but my mind shrieks for pity
And my heart aches for silence
And my soul weeps for all eternity

I know you think Iím lying
I know you wonít believe this to be
But that is all people
And this is me


isn't that depressing
I randomly thought it up about five minutes ago
what do you thing

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Post by Super-Z on Sat May 31, 2008 11:02 pm

sorry for the double post but that says "think" and not "thing"

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Post by fireflare77 on Sun Jun 01, 2008 3:25 am

Well, I think it would have been better with out the disclaimer that you put little work in to it. True, that braces you from insults but then people like me who liked it, like it less. *ponders* Sides, you won't get poem dissed here. Nice poem *pats poems head. Hand is bitten off by the dark little creature*

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Post by Super-Z on Sun Jun 01, 2008 10:37 am

why thank you very much spencer

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Post by fireflare77 on Mon Jun 02, 2008 5:05 pm

Any time!

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Post by Super-Z on Mon Jun 02, 2008 6:06 pm

*smiles, head bulges 3 sizes to large*

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