Mind
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Mind
If words could weep, then mine would scream
Mine would claw and beg
For mercy comes little in their world
And hope is far and spread
If people read thoughts, then children would cry
Sisters would bleed and mothers would die
For my thoughts are dark, as the deepest well
They spiral and twist and lurch and turn, until calm they find again
My face hides it well, but my mind shrieks for pity
And my heart aches for silence
And my soul weeps for all eternity
I know you think I’m lying
I know you won’t believe this to be
But that is all people
And this is me
isn't that depressing
I randomly thought it up about five minutes ago
what do you thing
Mine would claw and beg
For mercy comes little in their world
And hope is far and spread
If people read thoughts, then children would cry
Sisters would bleed and mothers would die
For my thoughts are dark, as the deepest well
They spiral and twist and lurch and turn, until calm they find again
My face hides it well, but my mind shrieks for pity
And my heart aches for silence
And my soul weeps for all eternity
I know you think I’m lying
I know you won’t believe this to be
But that is all people
And this is me
isn't that depressing
I randomly thought it up about five minutes ago
what do you thing
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Re: Mind
sorry for the double post but that says "think" and not "thing"
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Re: Mind
Well, I think it would have been better with out the disclaimer that you put little work in to it. True, that braces you from insults but then people like me who liked it, like it less. *ponders* Sides, you won't get poem dissed here. Nice poem *pats poems head. Hand is bitten off by the dark little creature*
Re: Mind
why thank you very much spencer
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*smiles, head bulges 3 sizes to large*
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