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My Rose Poem

Post by fireflare77 on Sun Apr 20, 2008 12:52 am

A beautiful rose,
Or so you think.
You want it but you can not grab it.
You reach for it and manage to hold on.
You squeeze it so it never gets away.
The pain is intollerable.
The rose begins to wilt,
You are sad to see it die.
All you have is thorns.
Is that all the rose really ever was?
No,
You know it was beautiful,
You just refuse to admit you killed it.
You can not replace it,
You'r heart wont let you pick another.
The garden looks much more beautiful,
when all of the flowers refuse to be picked.

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Post by Presidente on Thu May 29, 2008 12:00 am

Emo poems are not my thing and that is all I will say.
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Post by fireflare77 on Sun Jun 01, 2008 3:31 am

It's a good thing that wasn't an emo poem. You need to look up emo, you've got to think as opposed to merely relying on your blinked preconceptions.

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Post by Super-Z on Sun Jun 01, 2008 10:46 am

That was really good. And it wasn't an emo poem Carter, your just crazy.
O and I really liked the flow of the poem to but I think you could have used a word different than "sad"
otherwise AWESOME

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Post by fireflare77 on Mon Jun 02, 2008 5:00 pm

Thanks *bows*

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Post by Super-Z on Mon Jun 02, 2008 6:04 pm

now if only I could find another word for sad....

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Post by Synergy on Sat Mar 07, 2009 6:33 pm

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Post by fireflare77 on Thu Mar 12, 2009 5:28 pm

Hiya!

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